[Wiisdom]

Hii Everyone, this is my first time using this.. But I am really stuck and need a little bit off help!! Teachers always say that you need to make a plan of every essay you are going to write but I am SOOO stuck with this one I do not have a clue how to plan it, therefore i do not have a clue what to write about!! AHHH!! Someone please help.. I will be Sooo Happy =D

[Mr Thorpe]

What's the title??

The Jarrow march?

Life/industry in Jarrow?

[Wiisdom]

I have to explain why the Jarrow Crusade took place.. using sources F and H... =/.. Ohhh help me please!! can you help me plan it?

[Mr Thorpe]

It would help if I knew what sources F and H are!!

Also please remember that our role on this forum is HELP not to actually do it for you.

So I will happily point you in the right direction but not do it for you.

here will help

also here

and here

Let me know about the sources and I will see what I can do.

[Wiisdom]

Yes I know you can't do it for me.. Hehe..
I just need help writing a plan!!! Is there no websites that helps you to do this? Source F and Source H are both accounts of what happened during and before the crusade.. althought they tell me nothing about why the march took place!!
Do I need an: 1.Introduction
2. describe sources F and H
3. Use my knowledge about why it took place
4. link the sources to my own knowledge
5. Conclude why it took place
Does that sound right to you? Is that a good plan?

Please help me!!!
x.x.x.x

[Mr Thorpe]

The intro should talk about what the essay is going to say,
Your plan looks about right, just remember to have a BALANCED account and narrative, try not to make too bold assumptions unless there is complete and overwhelming evidence to back you up.
A good way to carry an argument in an essay is the old 'Aunt Sally' approach (like a coconut shy, set them up and knock em down).

On the score of why, it will be up to you to give possible explanations to the why in your essay.

Hope this helps! Let me know if you need more!

Good luck